Published January 26, 2011
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Thank you guys! I'm glad you all seem to have got exactly what I was feeling at the time I wrote it, which means I must of got something right
Wow. This made me want to reach out to you and help you find what you're looking for. Well done!
I really like this, the emotion was easy to read, and I felt despair, as if I were you.
I adored this. The emotion is conveyed in a concise manner. It's very applicable to people. Everyone has felt "lost" at some point in their life so everyone can relate to a time that this poem would have completely described them. Very well done.